You have established his point. You are suggesting to make the sentence "simpler" than it already is. But by doing so, you remove that part of the sentence which makes it profound. As it stands, the sentence is as simple as possible. It is precisely misguided oversimplification that he is warning about.

Are you sure[^]?

Why? What have we ever done to you to warrent being totured with your intellectual excreta? I apologize for that, it was uncalled for. :( I'm sure there are people who enjoy your posts.

Crazy criminals catch common cold causing craters. What do you get when you cross a joke with a rhetorical question? The metaphorical solid rear-end expulsions have impacted the metaphorical motorized bladed rotating air movement mechanism. Do questions with multiple question marks annoy you???

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[^] «I want to stay as close to the edge as I can without going over. Out on the edge you see all kinds of things you can't see from the center» Kurt Vonnegut.

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Yes, and that was before Breakfast!

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