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  • L Lost User

    I think the question should be do they like you

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    soap brain
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    Just answer the damn question.

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      Just answer the damn question.

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      Just get a room, the pair of you.

      Christian Graus No longer a Microsoft MVP, but still happy to answer your questions.

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      • D Dalek Dave

        Don't end sentences with Adverbs either! :)

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        ftw melvin
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        LOL (good recovery DD, I don't think anyone noticed).

        "If you reward everyone, there will not be enough to go around, so you offer a reward to one in order to encourage everyone." Mei Yaochen in the 'Doing Battle' section of Sun Tzu's: Art of War. .

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          Just get a room, the pair of you.

          Christian Graus No longer a Microsoft MVP, but still happy to answer your questions.

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          That's what I've been trying to do! He's not quite so corruptible, though. ;)

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            For English. Basically we had to draw a basic plot out of a hat and write a short story based off it. I drew 'running away from home', and I've written some, but I have no idea where I'm going with it. I need some ideas for an ending, and of course the other bits I've left out. General criticism is certainly welcome too, as long as it's critical praise! :-D Anyway, here it is: **** I felt like I’d made the right choice, even though there was no choice. Not really. All I’d done was all I could do. I’d put some warm clothes on, stuffed my black backpack that was only three weeks old. And that was it. I was gone. Slinking through the darkness, caressed by the breath that crystallised in front of me. Only able to see a distance of mere inches, the air was so bad. I was lost, it seemed. Despite the purpose in my walk, despite the assuredness in my face. I was as transparent as glass, a little kid lost and scared. Maybe my eyes gave it away, the way I always looked away. My lips in a silent prayer to whoever would listen. I told them that I didn’t want to die here tonight. And I kept on telling them. I was on my way to see my friend. He was the loneliest kid I had ever seen, save for me. Lonelier, even, because he was strong and I was weak. I needed him, but he didn’t need me. Still, he agreed to come with me tonight. He knew he had to, too. He was going to our secret place, like I was. And after that, we’d get away. Just like we’d always dreamed. I found him, as I knew I would. Waiting for me. And I felt a tremendous rush of gratitude towards him, for being here. Reminding me that I am not alone. I wanted him to see how happy I was to see him, but his eyes were downcast. Like he didn’t even see me. Like he was vaguely someone else. And he muttered, more to himself than anything, that we should get going right away. And we did. We were quiet, because we had to be, at least at the moment. But, the quietude dripped from him, from those sad, dark eyes. I wished he would look at me, let me know that we were in it together. Instead, he breathed deeply and silently, and focused inwardly. Shutting out the world. Telling IT to keep away, rather than the other way around. We had to be careful that we weren’t seen. Because that would be it. And it couldn’t be it, not yet. Because we weren’t ready for it to be. I could feel the danger hanging off my nerve-endings, threatening to snap them. And our footsteps seemed inordinately loud. And I couldn’t stop my stupid body from trembling. But we weren’t going t

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            The structure isn't quite right; you need to have some kind of conflict in the middle - perhaps an argument that causes the two of you to assess what you are doing: eg 1. Argument causes boy to leave you to return home (he can come back if it helps) 2. You come across other runaways whose life style forces you to consider where this will lead eg prostitution 3. You are forcibly parted 4. You reveal a revelation eg pregnancy that turns the story into something different 5. The boy turns into a flesh eating zombie, from Mars Overcoming the conflict will give some purpose to the end of the story. Texts to consider: Waiting for Godot (possibly a bit wordy) Of Mice and Men Watership Down Zombie Flesh Eaters from Mars

            "If you reward everyone, there will not be enough to go around, so you offer a reward to one in order to encourage everyone." Mei Yaochen in the 'Doing Battle' section of Sun Tzu's: Art of War. .

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            • D Dalek Dave

              Don't end sentences with Adverbs either! :)

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              ftw melvin
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              Did everyone read these brilliant emails from Giles Coren, including where he raged against an unstressed syllable at the end of a paragraph? http://www.guardian.co.uk/media/2008/jul/25/pressandpublishing.thetimes[^]

              "If you reward everyone, there will not be enough to go around, so you offer a reward to one in order to encourage everyone." Mei Yaochen in the 'Doing Battle' section of Sun Tzu's: Art of War. .

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              • L Lost User

                wrong place to post:omg: :wtf: :omg: :wtf: :omg: :wtf: :omg: :wtf: :sigh: :omg: :wtf: :sigh: :omg: :wtf: :sigh: :omg: :wtf: :doh: :sigh: :omg: :wtf: :sigh: :omg: :wtf: :omg: :wtf: :omg: :wtf: :omg: :wtf: :omg: :sigh:

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                ftw melvin
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                Why?

                "If you reward everyone, there will not be enough to go around, so you offer a reward to one in order to encourage everyone." Mei Yaochen in the 'Doing Battle' section of Sun Tzu's: Art of War. .

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                • D Dalek Dave

                  Ravel H. Joyce wrote:

                  That wasn't the plan, but it doesn't matter overly.

                  ? Never end a Sentence with a preposition! Up with this I will not put.

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                  Dirk Higbee
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                  Dalek Dave wrote:

                  Up with this I will not put

                  [low throaty noise] strong with this one the Force is :-D

                  Beauty is only a light switch away.

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                  • F ftw melvin

                    The structure isn't quite right; you need to have some kind of conflict in the middle - perhaps an argument that causes the two of you to assess what you are doing: eg 1. Argument causes boy to leave you to return home (he can come back if it helps) 2. You come across other runaways whose life style forces you to consider where this will lead eg prostitution 3. You are forcibly parted 4. You reveal a revelation eg pregnancy that turns the story into something different 5. The boy turns into a flesh eating zombie, from Mars Overcoming the conflict will give some purpose to the end of the story. Texts to consider: Waiting for Godot (possibly a bit wordy) Of Mice and Men Watership Down Zombie Flesh Eaters from Mars

                    "If you reward everyone, there will not be enough to go around, so you offer a reward to one in order to encourage everyone." Mei Yaochen in the 'Doing Battle' section of Sun Tzu's: Art of War. .

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                    I am all for the flesh-eating zombie martians (or is it martian zombies?). ;)

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                    • S soap brain

                      That's what I've been trying to do! He's not quite so corruptible, though. ;)

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                      Lost User
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                      you don't know me then. i'm the reason why leckey stoped posting

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                      • S soap brain

                        That's what I've been trying to do! He's not quite so corruptible, though. ;)

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                        ftw melvin
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                        It does feel like we've wandered into a 'domestic' *slowly backs away*

                        "If you reward everyone, there will not be enough to go around, so you offer a reward to one in order to encourage everyone." Mei Yaochen in the 'Doing Battle' section of Sun Tzu's: Art of War. .

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                        • T tufkap

                          I am all for the flesh-eating zombie martians (or is it martian zombies?). ;)

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                          ftw melvin
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                          Damn that's another Hollywood blockbuster I've let slip.

                          "If you reward everyone, there will not be enough to go around, so you offer a reward to one in order to encourage everyone." Mei Yaochen in the 'Doing Battle' section of Sun Tzu's: Art of War. .

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                          • L Lost User

                            you don't know me then. i'm the reason why leckey stoped posting

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                            toxcct
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                            that explains a lot about you already. now please shut up and go play in the sand box...

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                            • L Lost User

                              you don't know me then. i'm the reason why leckey stoped posting

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                              soap brain
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                              I know you well enough to fall in love with you.

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                                For English. Basically we had to draw a basic plot out of a hat and write a short story based off it. I drew 'running away from home', and I've written some, but I have no idea where I'm going with it. I need some ideas for an ending, and of course the other bits I've left out. General criticism is certainly welcome too, as long as it's critical praise! :-D Anyway, here it is: **** I felt like I’d made the right choice, even though there was no choice. Not really. All I’d done was all I could do. I’d put some warm clothes on, stuffed my black backpack that was only three weeks old. And that was it. I was gone. Slinking through the darkness, caressed by the breath that crystallised in front of me. Only able to see a distance of mere inches, the air was so bad. I was lost, it seemed. Despite the purpose in my walk, despite the assuredness in my face. I was as transparent as glass, a little kid lost and scared. Maybe my eyes gave it away, the way I always looked away. My lips in a silent prayer to whoever would listen. I told them that I didn’t want to die here tonight. And I kept on telling them. I was on my way to see my friend. He was the loneliest kid I had ever seen, save for me. Lonelier, even, because he was strong and I was weak. I needed him, but he didn’t need me. Still, he agreed to come with me tonight. He knew he had to, too. He was going to our secret place, like I was. And after that, we’d get away. Just like we’d always dreamed. I found him, as I knew I would. Waiting for me. And I felt a tremendous rush of gratitude towards him, for being here. Reminding me that I am not alone. I wanted him to see how happy I was to see him, but his eyes were downcast. Like he didn’t even see me. Like he was vaguely someone else. And he muttered, more to himself than anything, that we should get going right away. And we did. We were quiet, because we had to be, at least at the moment. But, the quietude dripped from him, from those sad, dark eyes. I wished he would look at me, let me know that we were in it together. Instead, he breathed deeply and silently, and focused inwardly. Shutting out the world. Telling IT to keep away, rather than the other way around. We had to be careful that we weren’t seen. Because that would be it. And it couldn’t be it, not yet. Because we weren’t ready for it to be. I could feel the danger hanging off my nerve-endings, threatening to snap them. And our footsteps seemed inordinately loud. And I couldn’t stop my stupid body from trembling. But we weren’t going t

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                                El Corazon
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                                Ravel H. Joyce wrote:

                                Because cold iron is strong. It survives.

                                I have the most problem with this. Cold iron does not react to its environment, the analogy is already "off" because the people are reacting. Perhaps like the bonsai, twisted by the events of life, yet still surviving, still reaching for the sun's warm (still reaching for the same goal of light). I am trying hard not to "fix" it, as I have often written creative writing assignments, mine are perhaps different in story and much worse english. My english assignments were often entertaining to read if you could get past the english mistakes. I knew I did my job good enough when I could distract the teacher from the errors using the story. :)

                                _________________________ Asu no koto o ieba, tenjo de nezumi ga warau. Talk about things of tomorrow and the mice in the ceiling laugh. (Japanese Proverb) John Andrew Holmes "It is well to remember that the entire universe, with one trifling exception, is composed of others."

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                                  The Developer wrote:

                                  I didn't read what to post yet

                                  What's your native language? :confused:

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                                  Ravel H. Joyce wrote:

                                  What's your native language?

                                  i vote IDIOT :laugh:

                                  Harvey Saayman - South Africa Junior Developer .Net, C#, SQL

                                  you.suck = (you.passion != Programming)

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                                  • S soap brain

                                    For English. Basically we had to draw a basic plot out of a hat and write a short story based off it. I drew 'running away from home', and I've written some, but I have no idea where I'm going with it. I need some ideas for an ending, and of course the other bits I've left out. General criticism is certainly welcome too, as long as it's critical praise! :-D Anyway, here it is: **** I felt like I’d made the right choice, even though there was no choice. Not really. All I’d done was all I could do. I’d put some warm clothes on, stuffed my black backpack that was only three weeks old. And that was it. I was gone. Slinking through the darkness, caressed by the breath that crystallised in front of me. Only able to see a distance of mere inches, the air was so bad. I was lost, it seemed. Despite the purpose in my walk, despite the assuredness in my face. I was as transparent as glass, a little kid lost and scared. Maybe my eyes gave it away, the way I always looked away. My lips in a silent prayer to whoever would listen. I told them that I didn’t want to die here tonight. And I kept on telling them. I was on my way to see my friend. He was the loneliest kid I had ever seen, save for me. Lonelier, even, because he was strong and I was weak. I needed him, but he didn’t need me. Still, he agreed to come with me tonight. He knew he had to, too. He was going to our secret place, like I was. And after that, we’d get away. Just like we’d always dreamed. I found him, as I knew I would. Waiting for me. And I felt a tremendous rush of gratitude towards him, for being here. Reminding me that I am not alone. I wanted him to see how happy I was to see him, but his eyes were downcast. Like he didn’t even see me. Like he was vaguely someone else. And he muttered, more to himself than anything, that we should get going right away. And we did. We were quiet, because we had to be, at least at the moment. But, the quietude dripped from him, from those sad, dark eyes. I wished he would look at me, let me know that we were in it together. Instead, he breathed deeply and silently, and focused inwardly. Shutting out the world. Telling IT to keep away, rather than the other way around. We had to be careful that we weren’t seen. Because that would be it. And it couldn’t be it, not yet. Because we weren’t ready for it to be. I could feel the danger hanging off my nerve-endings, threatening to snap them. And our footsteps seemed inordinately loud. And I couldn’t stop my stupid body from trembling. But we weren’t going t

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                                    A couple of suggestions: Get a copy of "Eat shoots and leaves" - as your use of punctuation gives a very staccato like feel to the writing; the words are good, there could just be more of a flowing feeling to the sentence structure. Also starting a sentence with "And" is generally to be avoided; this is because a full stop denotes the end of a sentence, whereas "and" is used for continuation(just like programming). Having said all of this I like what I see and like the use of similes. Good luck. ;)

                                    Continuous effort - not strength or intelligence - is the key to unlocking our potential.(Winston Churchill)
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                                    • L Lost User

                                      you don't know me then. i'm the reason why leckey stoped posting

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                                      leckey 0
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                                      WTF? I am still posting. You still can't grasp English and you are still the biggest Idiot of all time. And yes, I know it's time for the "I know you are but what am I" routine.

                                      Blog. http://craptasticnation.blogspot.com/[^]

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                                      • E El Corazon

                                        Ravel H. Joyce wrote:

                                        Because cold iron is strong. It survives.

                                        I have the most problem with this. Cold iron does not react to its environment, the analogy is already "off" because the people are reacting. Perhaps like the bonsai, twisted by the events of life, yet still surviving, still reaching for the sun's warm (still reaching for the same goal of light). I am trying hard not to "fix" it, as I have often written creative writing assignments, mine are perhaps different in story and much worse english. My english assignments were often entertaining to read if you could get past the english mistakes. I knew I did my job good enough when I could distract the teacher from the errors using the story. :)

                                        _________________________ Asu no koto o ieba, tenjo de nezumi ga warau. Talk about things of tomorrow and the mice in the ceiling laugh. (Japanese Proverb) John Andrew Holmes "It is well to remember that the entire universe, with one trifling exception, is composed of others."

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                                        El Corazon wrote:

                                        I have the most problem with this. Cold iron does not react to its environment, the analogy is already "off" because the people are reacting. Perhaps like the bonsai, twisted by the events of life, yet still surviving, still reaching for the sun's warm (still reaching for the same goal of light).

                                        I was thinking that they were trying to 'harden' themselves, even though I know that pure iron is probably quite soft!

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                                          I beg to differ - as Henry Fowler[^] once said: That different can only be followed by 'from' and not by 'to' is a superstition. So there. ;P ;)

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                                          It works for me! :-D

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